People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns?
Nowadays, getting very common that
number
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a number
the number
problems
grow rapidly and uncontrollably. Obviously
it is difficult to overcome them. In my opinion, the Add a comma
,Obviously
government
should not neglect their citizens
issues but start offering support to those who struggle, Change to a genitive case
citizen's
citizens'
instead
encouraging them to move to Add the preposition
ofinstead
smaller
area.
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a smaller
Firstly
, it is highly likely that problems
will never disappear after moving a place. To tackle unsolved, the government
ought to create support groups or centres, where people
will be able to access an advice
from Remove the article
advice
a piece of advice
a bit of advice
specialist
. Add an article
a specialist
This
way of solving the appearing problems
will definitely bring long lasting
results and can find an origin of them too. Add a hyphen
long-lasting
However
, cooperation and patience from an individual is
necessary to see Change the verb form
are
further
results. They also
must be honest and not hide anything because may not bring expected effects.
Secondly
, we should start
focus on Add the particle
tostart
people
before they get to the point, where they cannot see any escape from situation
. Surprisingly, Add an article
the situation
a situation
mental
health problem is still a taboo topic. Add an article
the mental
Furthermore
, the government
need take
an action to familiarize Fix the infinitive
to take
population
with Correct article usage
the population
growing
number of Add an article
a growing
the growing
people
who struggle and are afraid to ask for help. We all know,
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apply
that is
better to prevent than treat. In addition
, the media have a
power to start a campaign, which may result in an improvement Change the article
the
at
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in
this
field.
To summarize, leaving problems
behind will never help people
to fight for themselfs
and start a new episode in their life. Hiding in Correct your spelling
themselves
smaller
town will not make anybody stronger as well. The Add an article
a smaller
government
decisions must be more adequate in the best interest of each individual.Submitted by meforqq on
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