Environmental problems are too big for individual countries and individual people to address. We have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is to address it at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, dealing with environmental issues has been

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unmanagable

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burden for

countries

and citizens to act individually.

Therefore

, some people think that

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global collaboration is the

last

chance for us to preserve our nature. I strongly agree with

this

idea and will argue why some measures should be taken internationally.

To begin

with, during

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industrialization

industrilization

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period, fossil fuels in developing

countries

were exploited which resulted in the contamination of massive lands. Most of

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actions have been taken by developed

countries

which were so focused on growing their economies,

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result

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they completely neglected the fact about environmental destruction. Even though

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there are some organizations located in under-developed

countries

dealing with environmental issues, they don’t have enough capacity to diminish the level of damage

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been done to their environment due to the lack of technologies and specialized professionals. So, in order to see desirable

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highly-developed

countries

should exchange their years of experience in technologies and establishing strategies with under-developed

countries

.

Secondly

, it is clear that every incremental change on our planet has an impact on each part of it. Years of observations have proven the effect of global warming on all sides of the world which originated from

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level of carbon dioxide

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the

atmoshpere

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atmosphere

. As global warming is a heating debate,

countries

need to come together and launch a detailed program to deal with

this

problem. Since they have diverse experience on

this

topic, collaboration could have effective results. One clear example of

merits

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of working together can be United Nation’s environmental programs which

are being continuing

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in various

countries

and have

stuctured

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structured

agenda. Owing to

this

successful experience immediate actions should be taken towards global action. To conclude, in order to preserve our environment nations and governments should work together, since acting

seperately

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separately

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small effect on improvement because of the high level of pollution and destruction.