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YOU WERE ON THE FLIGHT TO LONDON AND YOU FORGOT THE BAG AT THE AIRPOT. -EXPLAIN YOUR PROBLEM -GIVE THEM THE DETAILS OF YOUR BAG - WHAT YOU WANT THEM TO DO WITH THE BAG

#flight #london #bag #airpot #-explain #-give
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to inform you that I have forgotten my
bag
 at the
airpot
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airport
. Actually, I was on a flight to London and when I got
at
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to
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 the
airpot
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airport
, I was in a rush to attend a meeting which was arranged in my hotel where I was gonna stay. I was running late according to the meeting schedule, and I totally forgot about my
bag
. The colour of the
bag
 is red and it can contain approximately 10 kgs. weight. It might not be that heavy because it just contains clothes and other cosmetics. The handle of the
bag
 is blue which is
little
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 old as a colour combination of red and blue, so, it might be busy for you to identify.
Also
, it has a slip on the bottom corner that contains the initials of my name. I would really appreciate
if
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it if
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 you will send my
bag
 to the hotel. I am willing to pay all the charges of sending it to my hotel. With Regards
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