Topic: It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?

The

students

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the backbone of every nation. They can build a future country.

However

, a large

amount

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of people believe that it is good for

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university

students

are lived separately without parents compare to they are being lived with

father

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their father

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and mother at home. I completely agree with

this

statement because the college pupils should stay alone with friends or separate room and

this

trend would help

to

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their future.

To begin

with, there are many reasons for

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positive trend.

Firstly

,

students

have a chance to know about

outside

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world

as a result

, they will become a good

knowledgeble

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knowledgeable

and skill person in their upcoming years.

Secondly

, they can get

experience

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the experience

an experience

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of how to manage and use

finacial

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financial

resources with their own life as a consequent, the

pubils

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pupils

public

will never spend money on unwanted expenses because they are known about the value of money when they are handled cash.

For example

, the Western countries parents are allowed to their children live

separetely

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separately

when they are gotten an adult age.

Furthermore

, an adult education person should live without their family and parents must encourage to do

this

because the

students

have to stand with their own leg. Most

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fathers and mothers are always pampered to their kids even they are gotten matured level

as a result

, they can not survive without any balance

this

means always needs another man hands

for

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hold

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a hold

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.

For instance

, the Asian part of countries never allowed to their babies stay lonely even they will be getting married

consequently

,

this

students

never explore to out of the world because they have not

meet

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a

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opportunity to do. To conclude, there are many advantages where

students

are lived alone but

disadavantages

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disadvantages

can not be ignored.

However

, university

students

will

be stay

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be staying

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at

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in

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private

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the private

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room while they will manage their own expenses

such

as

tution

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tuition

fee, rent,

accomdation

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accommodation

and etc. Because they

are being working

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are being worked

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while studying.

Therefore

they will not afraid about their future in order

to

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so

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they can get job experience

also

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, as a result,

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as a result

this

will assist for their tomorrow work career.