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Women should have an equal role alongside men in both police and armed forces. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#women #role #men #police #forces
It is often said that both
the
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genders should have
equal
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 role and
oppurtunity
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opportunity
 to
work
 in
defence
 firms and armed
forces
. I completely agree with
this
 opinion
,
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 and support the idea that females should be allowed to
work
 alongside male candidates.
Firstly
, In the 21st century, every member of the house is expected to
work
 which will not only benefit self-development
,
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 but
also
 add to total household income. On that note, If the females are demotivated by not encouraging them to
work
 on
similar
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 platform as men
,
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 it sabotages the growth of woman culture.
For example
, if the
women
 are debarred from participating in
police
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the police
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 academy and other
defence
 institutions, it will reduce their development.
Hence
, more efforts should be made for their involvement
to
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armed
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forces
.
In addition
 to that, based on the concept of gender equality, every woman is not equal to
man
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 in terms of both mental and physical form.
moreover
,
women
 can very well excel
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 duty and tasks assigned to them as compared to man. Based on that, fighting for justice against outlaws and defending the lives of citizens can be very well taken by the
women
.
For Instance
, night patroling duty by police stations and other
defence
 organizations can be done both by male and female.
Nevertheless
, armed
forces
 can hire and offer roles to fight against criminal offences. To summarize,
women
 can
work
 on equivalent platform and designation on the
defence
 and armed
forces
 without any considerable doubts and in my opinion, they should be very well granted equal roles.
Submitted by Aditya Mehta on

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