Old people think that life was better in the past than what it is now .DO you agree or disagree? Give your reasons and examples from your own life.

Life
has changed considerably in the
last
century. The oldest affirm that living in the past was better
compare
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to compare

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to the recent years. I personally believe that the quality of
life
is far higher than it was before and so I disagree with the given statement. There are many aspects that will make
life
better now than before, but the main one is surely the advent of the internet. In fact, thanks to new technologies
such
as computers and phones we can now be connected with anyone from anywhere and at
anytime
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any time

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.
This
, allows us
for example
, to be able to work from home or even in a different country, where living is more convenient and so save a good amount of money that can be spent to buy a house or simply for
traveling
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travelling

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and visit the world. In fact, another good reason why today's
life
is better is that we can now travel everywhere at a reasonable price.
For
instance
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you can live in Africa but still be able to see your parents or friends once a month while they are living in Italy. In the
past
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people would have spent 2 months of their salary to fly to the US while today it is accessible even for
the
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teenagers. These, are only
few
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benefits of
the
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modern
life
compare to the past. In conclusion, nowadays
life
is made much simpler thanks to the internet and to
low cost
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airlines even if there are many other benefits
compare
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compared

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to the past.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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