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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#group #students #classroom #home
Today opinions divide between the efficiency rate of individual online learning against that of
group
 work in the offline classroom. It still believed that old proven methods of
group
 work help should be far more efficient and prolific
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 since
group
 education boosts soft skills and allows
group
 discussion. The essay will attempt to prove the thesis above and an individual view will be given in conclusion.
Firstly
, offline
group
 learning lay the beneficial groundwork for a personality within a society. Studying in class helps an adolescent to find well-reasoned arguments and discuss issues, gaining much from opposing views and professor review.
Furthermore
,
such
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 allows for a better understanding of concepts through peer-to-peer review. All in all, classroom learning drastically increase soft skills and make an invaluable contribution to personal growth.
Secondly
, live human interaction
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 the level of serotonin, widely known as
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 hormone".
Although
 online education is considering time-saving,
for instance
 in terms of travel time,
such
 experts seriously underestimate biological needs in
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 interaction.
For example
, a Stanford research
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 conclude from a number of researchers that offline talks and events mostly fulfil the human demand for communication, which results in a number of positive hormones occurred in
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 body after . Generally speaking, shifting most learning events online could seriously result in human development.
Finally
, it can be concluded that
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 cycle of learning online could potentially threaten the future of their personality as well as under-supply
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 biological needs. It is a firm belief, that education should be impersonal, with revolver shots of online webinar sessions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Collaborative learning
  • Debate
  • Discipline
  • Engagement
  • Feedback loop
  • Peer support
  • Educational resources
  • Adaptive learning
  • Self-motivation
  • Independent study
  • Digital literacy
  • Virtual classroom
  • Accessibility
  • E-learning
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