crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas. why do you think that is? what can be done to reduce the crime rate.

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ancient times, crime has begun to follow world development and GDP growth, mostly depicting negative statistics in well-developed cities, rather than in villages. From the objective viewpoint, there are two major factors

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make the most contribution among all - the relative ease to attain a weapon in

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and a higher probability to receive a great bounty. The essay will discuss both points and the crime-preventing recommendation will be given in the conclusion.

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of financial and governmental power,

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as high-densely cities have attracted all sorts of offenders. The trend logically conveys that a whole range of crime-related instruments would be much easier to purchase there, which automatically increase the chances of instant crimes.

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, the Ukrainian capital, Kyiv possess the largest arms black market, which turns into

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higher crime rate in comparison with the other Ukrainian regions, according to the National Police Data Website. All in all, building a life and career path as an ordinary citizen deviler a risk of becoming a victim of

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daily hijacking or banditry.

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gangsterism lies

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profit-making, which could be maximized at large industrial city centres.

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profits which may be equalled to several illegal activities

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rural areas.

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less risk-averse humankind

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since modern towns supplied with all up-to-date social security measures

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as street cameras and alarm buttons with nearly instant police response. To sum up, revenues in cities could be earned much faster, which go along with higher risks to be imprisoned.

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pillars of modern street banditry are accessibility of guns and high profits. It is assumed, that special procedure, which leads to lower a crime rate

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greater deduction to police and special forces from the national budget.