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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

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The
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 had remained a viable source of knowledge in the 20th century. At those times, the
Newspaper
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 was the only accessible medium of getting informed with surrounding and the latest happenings. With the rapid insurgency in the earth of technology, several innovations led to the modification in process of acquiring knowledge through the
newspapers
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. Several origins have contributed towards its downfall, yet the existence of
newspapers
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 still resides in today's world. Enumerating a few of the major factors in the downward spiral of the
news
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 consumption through
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,
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, with the mass growth of social media podium and easily accessible nature of everything on the aforementioned mediums has led to the redundancy in the usage of
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 in daily lives or through the television. People can now get easily updated with events and the latest happenings locally and globally around nature within few seconds.
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, enabling limited usage of
newspapers
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 and televisions.
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, through Facebook, users get various
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 feeds on different genres of discussions in no matter of time( at a doorstep of a fingertip).
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, with the technological advancements and cut-off pricing competition in the market, a plethora of
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channels
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 have shifted their focus on adapting effective
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 of communications
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 as disseminating the
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 through e-
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instead
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 of the traditional way of paper-based magazines. As it curtails the cost of miscellaneous expenses that occur in printing and hefty stationery charges,
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 letting various
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 agencies opt for an online mode of communication. Namely, one of the oldest and popular
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 company in Pakistan Dawn
news
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, has effectively reduced application of printed
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 reducing it printing cost and moving towards a more feasible and accessible online
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 platform by the masses. Interestingly,
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, a lot of
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 shared on social media platforms lacks the element of reliability
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 discrediting its source. As the majority of shared
information
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 lacks genuineness.
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, often
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 shared on the social terrace is misled to attract views and subscriptions
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 ultimately misleading the consumer of
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news
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.
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 restrictions on
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 availability through online social platforms should be imposed.
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, the habit of reading a
newspaper
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 should be instilled from a young age as it strengthens reading and writing skills, improves vocabulary, and enables students to be updated with recent ongoing researches and various projects. In conclusion, albeit the consumption of
newspapers
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 and
news
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 on TV
channels
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 has been spiralling downward for years, yet its non-existence in our practical lives is impractical. Keeping in mind above mentioned solutions, a revival can be forecasted in the earth of
information
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 through
newspapers
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 and TV
channels
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.
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