Global is one of the biggest threats humans faces in the 21st century, and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible and solution.

We have seen many negative changes : the Earth becomes warmer as well as the
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rising in oceans levels are one of the burning issues we face up to
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This
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I suggest some possible solutions. It is
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that global warming makes
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iceberg
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melt and
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leads to sea levels
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creeping
up. That means it causes the flooding of people’s residences.People who live in the coastal areas will be
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. Residents living in the seashore will become homeless and not to mention all of their
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possession
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and corn-land.
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, sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates which will cause saltwater
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. It prevents farmers
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. Some possible solution to
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problem
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to protect the environment and
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build
flood barriers. Humans have to take action to tackle
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as soon as possible because
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humans’ life has negative effects on
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and climate on Earth.And the other solution is to build a flood barrier . Saving
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environment
is necessary ,
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, it
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immediately . So to build a flood barrier will solve the emergency situations today. In conclusion , many
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caused by increasing global temperatures is one of the
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we are facing up to. I hope my
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will give a hand to solve
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global warming
  • sea levels
  • alarming rates
  • associated
  • possible solutions
  • increased flooding
  • loss of habitat
  • displacement
  • vulnerable
  • infrastructure
  • storm surges
  • economic impact
  • saltwater intrusion
  • freshwater systems
  • coastal defense systems
  • sea walls
  • levees
  • mangroves
  • coral reefs
  • wave energy
  • erosion
  • urban planning
  • climate resilience
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • mitigate
  • adaptive measures
  • public awareness
  • international cooperation
  • sustainable
  • environmental policies
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