Some people say history is one the most important school subjects . Other people think that , in today's world , subjects like science and Technology are more important than History . Discussed both of views and give your opinion

People have different views about
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of learning
History
in
school
as opposed to Science and Technology . I would argue that
History
can be as one of the use full
subjects
. In the following essay , both of the ideas will be discussed . Preserving
of
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cultural
inheritance
would be the power full reason for being important to teach
History
in schools .
For instance
, there are many historical stories , monuments, customs , clothes and constructions which have been
inharitated
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inherited
inhabited
by our past generation .
Moreover
, these
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roll
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in
identify
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of societies because they indicate our traditions and cultures . Apparently , the best
an
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and
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reasonable way of keeping a culture is teaching
History
to children in
school
and create
a
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motivation in children to preserve their cultural
inheritance
in the
future
.
Therefore
, culture and saving historical
inheritance
are one of the most essential matters in countries and public intend to keep them for
next generation
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and if
History
is thought in educational environments , ancient , traditional and historical
art works
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and customs will have been kept in countries by the
next
10 or 20 years .
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the other hand , seeming some
subjects
such
as scientific and technological lessons more necessary than
History
would be the fact that , recently , modernization and industrialization have been
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a positive
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influence on
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in people life .
Furthermore
, if
Sciens
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Science
Sciences
subjects
are not lessened in
school
, improvement and development in industries and new discoveries will not occur in the
future
. As an example , some solutions to
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green houses
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gases as an environmental damaging have been discovered by scientists and using new technology and it should
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to
new
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a new
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generation by learning in schools.
Consequently
, people can not have a desirable and comfortable life in the
future
, unless scientific and technological
subjects
are seemed to teach in
school
. In conclusion , in my opinion , despite the fact that teaching and learning Science would be beneficial in countries
future
,
History
is one the most
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full matter in
school
because children will be encouraged to preserve their culture and historical
inheritance
in the
future
that it will be influential to identify of society .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • crucial
  • comprehend
  • retrospect
  • gain insights
  • reflect on
  • sharpen
  • evaluate
  • significance
  • heritage
  • legacy
  • advent
  • breakthroughs
  • sustain
  • sustainability
  • revolutions
  • empowered
  • overcome
  • transform
  • advancements
  • collaboration
  • cooperation
  • diversity
  • fulfilling
  • promote
  • facilitate
  • prosperity
  • enhance
  • foster
  • foundation
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