Some people say history is one the most important school subjects . Other people think that , in today's world , subjects like science and Technology are more important than History . Discussed both of views and give your opinion
People have different views about
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of learning Add an article
the effectiveness
History
in Use synonyms
school
as opposed to Science and Technology . I would argue that Use synonyms
History
can be as one of the use full Use synonyms
subjects
. In the following essay , both of the ideas will be discussed .
Preserving Use synonyms
of
cultural Change preposition
apply
inheritance
would be the power full reason for being important to teach Use synonyms
History
in schools . Use synonyms
For instance
, there are many historical stories , monuments, customs , clothes and constructions which have been Linking Words
inharitated
by our past generation . Correct your spelling
inherited
inhabited
Moreover
, these Linking Words
matter
play a key Change the determiner
matters
roll
in Correct your spelling
role
identify
of societies because they indicate our traditions and cultures . Apparently , the best Replace the word
identity
an
reasonable way of keeping a culture is teaching Correct your spelling
and
History
to children in Use synonyms
school
and create Use synonyms
a
motivation in children to preserve their cultural Correct article usage
apply
inheritance
in the Use synonyms
future
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, culture and saving historical Linking Words
inheritance
are one of the most essential matters in countries and public intend to keep them for Use synonyms
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next generation
and if Add a hyphen
next-generation
History
is thought in educational environments , ancient , traditional and historical Use synonyms
art works
and customs will have been kept in countries by the Correct your spelling
artworks
next
10 or 20 years .
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In
the other hand , seeming some Change preposition
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subjects
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such
as scientific and technological lessons more necessary than Linking Words
History
would be the fact that , recently , modernization and industrialization have been Use synonyms
positive
influence on Add an article
a positive
tranquility
in people life . Change the spelling
tranquillity
Furthermore
, if Linking Words
Sciens
Correct your spelling
Science
Sciences
subjects
are not lessened in Use synonyms
school
, improvement and development in industries and new discoveries will not occur in the Use synonyms
future
. As an example , some solutions to Use synonyms
decline
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declining
green houses
gases as an environmental damaging have been discovered by scientists and using new technology and it should Correct your spelling
greenhouses
be transfer
to Change the verb form
be transferred
new
generation by learning in schools. Add an article
a new
the new
Consequently
, people can not have a desirable and comfortable life in the Linking Words
future
, unless scientific and technological Use synonyms
subjects
are seemed to teach in Use synonyms
school
.
In conclusion , in my opinion , despite the fact that teaching and learning Science would be beneficial in countries Use synonyms
future
, Use synonyms
History
is one the most Use synonyms
help
full matter in Replace the word
helpful
school
because children will be encouraged to preserve their culture and historical Use synonyms
inheritance
in the Use synonyms
future
that it will be influential to identify of society .Use synonyms
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