The majority of news being reported is bad news such as wars famines accidents and crime. Why do you think that is? Do you think the news should be a balance of both good and bad news?

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In
this
modern times,
this
particular issue has become increasingly common .Since a majority of the masses are highly interested in
this
sort of
news
that why newspaper often try to publish only these kinds of stuff.In my opinion,I reckon there should be a newspaper which contains combined
news
of bad and good .
To begin
with, Newspaper is highly popular among individuals in
this
generation.They read the paper in the morning in order to enjoy some time and
also
for knowing various sort of things.
Thus
publishers try to allocate a variety of
news
for making weekly more interesting and creative.since people from different age read their paper they try to add a variety of
news
such
as wars ,famines , sports and so on.If they only add one
news
their magazine will be less popular amongst the nation.That's the main reason why reporter includes bad
news
along with the good one.
However
,in our
life
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there is a
lots
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of sadness and work pressure in order
mitigate
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this people
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read a weekly .
Although
this
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papers include lots of
negetive
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negative
news
it's still popular.since many masses feel its a great way to pass times so if publishers only publish worse
news
it will definitely
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affect
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in there life because among all of
this
gloomy and
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black
bleak
news
they
also
try to read positive and uplifting
newses
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news
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.
Moreover
, positive
news
can boost their spirits For all of
this
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reasons,it significant to create a balance between the
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news
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.
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