The development of tourism has contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

placed on the opinion that the advent of tourism is a determining factor propelling English into the most common
in the world.
, a lot of people’s perspectives suppose that
phenomenon will lead to English becoming the
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It appears that the adverb solely is attempting to modify the noun language. Consider replacing the adverb with an adjective.

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to be communicated globally. In
essay, the pros and cons of speaking one
will be discussed. From my point of view, there are two major benefits from only communicating
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English. The
one is that people from different nations will not concern about
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the language
a language

The noun phrase language barrier seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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barrier, so

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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