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In many countries, children spend long hours on homework. Some people think less homework can reduce student’s stress and give them a chance to develop other skills. What is your opinion about this?

#countries #children #hours #homework #people #student’s #stress #chance #skills
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 are numerous numbers of countries who are assigning lots of
hometasks
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home tasks
 to students despite
of
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their long school hours
studies
.
However
, some people contemplate that home
assignmenta
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assignment
assignments
 should be alleviated,thence children can
also
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 in their avocations or other sports activities which keep them physically
ande
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and
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 mentally fit.I strongly agree with the above statement due to some plausible factors that will be discussed in the following fragments with
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appropriate examples. To embark on, educational institutes should not only work more on academic subjects rather
then
this
 equal importance ought to give on other activities
such
 as sports, arts, music which
consequently
, escalate interest of students in
studies
 and get an opportunity to explore themselves in sports or arts in whichever they have
keen
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 interest.
For instance
,MS Dhoni sets a great
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example
,as he concentrated more on
his
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 ambition
that is
 cricket rather than indulging him in only
theortrical
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theoretical
theatrical
 subjects.
Moreover
,after following his passion now he is well known
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the
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worldwide as a captain of
india
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.
Furthermore
, mentors must teach students not only to focus on their
studies
 but
also
 to more emphasis on their goals that what they want to become in future and how they can manage time for
achievement
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 of their specific goals. On the flip side,
childhood
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 phase is a most tremendous and memorable time during which we collect lots of beautiful memories,
therefore
 they should not only remember about their home projects but
also
 about the activities they have done in different streams and due to which they won lots of rewards and receive appreciation.It is crucial for every guardians and tutor to confer their children support to follow their aims which are set by them apart from their school
studies
. In the final comment,it is apparent that homework should be reduced
,
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so that kids can
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 more on other factors and make their childhood more fascinating
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