in many countries a small number of people earn extremly high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but other think that government should not allow salaries above a certain level. Give your opinion.

In

this

contemporary era, a few

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of people are gotten

extremly

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extremely

huge salaries compared to others.

However

, a fair amount of folks believe that

this

is the best for the

country

in many ways while others think that the ministry should not provide above a particular level. I strongly agree with the

first

point and I will be mentioning my points in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are many reasons for I support

this

point because when a

country

is provided

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large number of wages while the nation automatically developed.

Moreover

, the ministry can utilize

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the employer knowledge and skills for the nation improvements.

This

trend can receive more taxes from the earners

such

as income tax, service tax and property duty in

oder

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order

to the territory is obtained more benefit . The population are taken high salary based on their capacity and ability while they never go to any other

country

for work

as a result

, the home

country

can use their potential from who the citizens

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in other words

they can work for their own state.

Furthermore

, if get more compensation from the government or organisation while the man will find innovative

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and they can use creative mind too. The worker will obtain huge compensation at that time they have a chance to think for their own state

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development

and

this

kind of the employee will serve and devote to work not only the

country

development but

also

the company

breakthoughs

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breakthroughs

breakthrough

too.

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, the world top most company

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Google.

This

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organisation

organization

is given

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amount of wages to their CEO. Not only the wages but

also

provides the industry shares

therefore

the authority level person can do his best for their industry

as a result

, the industry will get more profit compared to others. To conclude, negativity can not be ignored

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means provide vast salaries have some problems but we will buy

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valuable things while we could spend

a

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more money in order to hold that.

Therefore

, the folks should obtain good money it depends on their job position, experience, and ability.