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Today, large shopping centres and shopping malls are more common than small shops. Is this a positive development or negative development?

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Introduction
A shift from tiny shops to bigger shopping complexes or shopping malls can be observed in today’s society. Owing to its merits, which are
convenience
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a convenience
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 for
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, economic growth of the country and more
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, it will have fruitful consequences.
Body paragraph 1
The aforementioned development will lead to raising the economy for the nation. The reason is that shop owners, whose shops are opened in the large shopping centres, and owner of the mall itself, all have to pay huge taxes to the government, thereby, which helps the country to gown strongly economically. A survey revealed that government economic growth increased by 20% in the
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, it makes life much easier for
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.
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 is because if all the needy things
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 as furniture, outfits, groceries, entertainment centres, food and so on, all are available in one shopping complex and
people
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 can buy it in one go;
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, it will save time for the locals as they can do something productive in spare time.
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, my uncle’s family do all the necessary shopping once
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a month and their family spend quality time as well.
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. Due to the large crowd in these places, more management required in various fields: car-parking area, security check-in at entrance and exit, in shops to attend to the customers, to clean the whole building, which leads to the large opportunity of
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 for poor
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. In an interview, a great businessman reported that they have given
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 to 1000 needy
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 in their new shopping complex.
Conclusion
To conclude, it leads to better
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, economic growth and convenience for families;
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, its consequence will have constructive outcomes.

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