You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write the letter to editor of the magazine. In your letter: - correct the information in the article - Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information - Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am a long-standing reader of your weekly edition of “Travel with Us” Magazine. I am writing

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letter mainly to draw your immediate attention regarding an article published about my hometown in an effort to provide a bit more exposure to travel-related activities in it. Well, while I appreciate

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helpful information;

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, I regret to inform you that there is a factual error that

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am concerned about.

To begin

with. I read the complete article thoroughly Since you wrote regarding culture and customs

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found that it is quite interesting.

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, the material related to the climate of our city was incorrect. You reckon that maximum temperature reaches up to 40 C degrees which is not true, the reality our urban does not get higher than 32 degrees C during the hot season. Correctly

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word on your magazine is extremely vital for the livelihood of numerous peoples in my town in that they heavily rely on

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tourist industry.

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, wrong instruction could lead prospective tourists to visit my country at the wrong time which will cause them disappointment and

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effect on our country’s reputable. In light of the situation, I would appreciate

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long as you could investigate the facts that I have pointed out and hope you will take the necessary steps to provide factual advice to readers. Yours faithfully, Thu Loan Nguyen