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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

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Nowadays, more and more rubbish is being produced in
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society. Many
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 opine that
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 amount of
waste
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 is being scrapped without recycling and claim that the enforcement of
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law
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 is the only solution to promote and
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recycling
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. It is indispensable for the
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 of the state to reinforce the
law
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 for its citizen to maximize
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recycling. There are many ways
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 can encourage
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 to reuse the
waste
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 generated on daily basis at an individual level,
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waste
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 by using it to produce
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biogas.
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 reduce consumption of
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 energy sources, which are finite, and increase the use of natural energy source which is beneficial for the ecosystem.
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, schools can
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 introduce subject to educate students about the importance of recycling. Because of lack of awareness among
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 about how to do the recycling process,
waste
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 is increasing day by day which can be controlled by
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government
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a government
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 body. By imposing the
law
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government
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 can control
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recycling which not only will help to compulsory recycling by
people
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 but
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 reduce the amount of
waste
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.
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,
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government
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 can
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 introduce some reward to encourage
people
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 for recycling.
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, introducing a
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 may be helpful to control the process of reuse. To recapitulate,
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 there are different ways of promoting recycling, my firm conviction is that introducing
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 is the most efficient way to recycle the trash material with compulsion which
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 is uncontrollable by the
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.
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 will not only reduce the consumption of finite resources but
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 help to diminish
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 of
waste
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 generation which will be helpful for the environment.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Waste management
  • Recycling
  • Sustainability
  • Mandatory
  • Voluntary
  • Legislative measures
  • Environmental impact
  • Public awareness
  • Regulation
  • Sanctions
  • Compliance
  • Recycling facilities
  • Consumer behavior
  • Waste reduction
  • Resource conservation
  • Circular economy
  • Eco-friendly
  • Biodegradable
  • Landfill
  • Global initiative
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