Do you think it is better for students to work before their university study? why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.

One of the most

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conspicuous

trends of today's world is a

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colossal

upsurge in the number of

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believing

that

students

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do to work before university study .There is a widespread worry that

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will only lead to a myriad of concerns

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one's life.

However

, I do not entirely accept

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and I will explain why in

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essay. There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant one is that some

students

have not

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the regular

class

so they need to more practice at home. some people had to join the advanced tutorial

class

before

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cannot only contribute to other

students

are present

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every

class

and they do not need to any

class

before the teaching,but

also

lead to numerous other benefits in various fields.

Besides

, its impact on society is far-reaching indeed. There are

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, some pitfalls that can easily in potential benefits. The primary aspects

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from the fact that by observing the aforementioned trend, people hand not only realised its gravity

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but

also

gauged the

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magnitude

of its repercussions when it comes to today's ever-changing lifestyle.

Hence

, it is apparent why many are

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against

again

of teaching before the school. In view of the arguments outlined above, an individual can conclude that despite drawbacks, the benefits of the

students

are indeed too great to ignore.