Some people suggest that young people should take a job for a few years between school and university. Discuss what the advantages and disadvantages might be for people who do this
It is felt that spending a few
years
to Use synonyms
work
from finishing school to starting Use synonyms
university
would be profitable . There are some merits and demerits in Use synonyms
this
idea that both of them will be argued in the following essay .
The advantages of having a Linking Words
job
before Use synonyms
education
in the Use synonyms
university
would be the fact that Use synonyms
firstly
, people will be able to choose the best and a reasonable major in the Linking Words
university
which will have a positive influence on their successes in the Use synonyms
education
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, it Linking Words
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seems
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seemed
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deemed
as
a Replace the word
like
work
experience that will be Use synonyms
help
full to achieve a proper Replace the word
helpful
job
after Use synonyms
the
graduation. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, when Linking Words
children
look after a profession, they can find their abilities and skills in specialized fields .Use synonyms
For instance
, if a person talent or ability in electrical activities is discovered , he will decide to study electrical engineering as academic Linking Words
education
and she/he has Use synonyms
work
experience for Use synonyms
years
and it is a desirable resume to reach a suitable Use synonyms
work
in the future. Use synonyms
Consequently
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children
can have Use synonyms
opportunity
to study in the perfect field in the universities and achieve better Correct article usage
the opportunity
job
positions in the future by working before beginning the academic Use synonyms
education
.
Stopping academic Use synonyms
education
is the main drawback of having a Use synonyms
job
between school and Use synonyms
university
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, if Linking Words
children
earn money before going to Use synonyms
university
, they will be encouraged to do Use synonyms
work
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instead
of professional Linking Words
education
. Use synonyms
Also
, they will Linking Words
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lose
loose
some Correct your spelling
lose
job
positions in the future . Because many employers need workforce by good qualification and academic degree .Use synonyms
For example
,if people are not teaching graduate, they will not be employed as a teacher .
In conclusion .As the positive points . If people do Linking Words
work
between school and academic Use synonyms
education
for few Use synonyms
years
, they will have reached a suitable Use synonyms
job
by the Use synonyms
next
5 Linking Words
years
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, they can read the better major. Linking Words
In contrast
, missing the desirable profession and omit Linking Words
children
motivation to continue their educations can be Use synonyms
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demerits .Correct article usage
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