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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays in
this
 fast phased life, it is important for
people
 to spend some quality time with their
children
 and become good parents. Some
people
 say that
schools
 should be responsible to teach every young individual about parental values. I agree with the idea of
schools
 teaching parents should be implemented. There are some skills that a person needs to become a good parent.
For instance
, one should know how to take care of his/her
children
 and teach them
importance
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the importance
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 of their tradition and cultural values.
Also
, they should play with the
children
 and behave like a child if they need to. I have defined some reasons in
following
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 paragraph.
Firstly
,
people
 have accepted
culture
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the culture
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 of
nuclear
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the nuclear
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 family and they do not have any elder parents to teach them about parenthood.
Secondly
,
people
 have
very
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 tight schedule of work and they can not spend time with their
children
.
For instance
,
people
 used to leave their baby with
baby
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the baby
a baby
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 sitter because
,
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 they have other commitments towards their work.
In addition
 to that
people
 are forgetting the value of their culture and tradition that they should pass on to their babies.
On the other hand
, some
people
 argue that they do not have extra time to go to school and learn about good parental skills.
Furthermore
, some
people
 still live with their elders who can guide them. To conclude, I believe that it is indeed crucial for every person to develop some skills to grow up their baby and
schools
 are the best options for that purpose.
However
,
people
 should feel it convenient and comfortable to learn from the
schools
.
Submitted by Aditya Patel on

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