Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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Nowadays in
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fast phased life, it is important for
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to spend some quality time with their
children
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and become good parents. Some
people
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say that
schools
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should be responsible to teach every young individual about parental values. I agree with the idea of
schools
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teaching parents should be implemented. There are some skills that a person needs to become a good parent.
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, one should know how to take care of his/her
children
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and teach them
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of their tradition and cultural values.
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, they should play with the
children
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and behave like a child if they need to. I have defined some reasons in
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paragraph.
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,
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have accepted
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of
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family and they do not have any elder parents to teach them about parenthood.
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,
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have
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tight schedule of work and they can not spend time with their
children
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.
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,
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used to leave their baby with
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the baby
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sitter because
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they have other commitments towards their work.
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to that
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are forgetting the value of their culture and tradition that they should pass on to their babies.
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, some
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argue that they do not have extra time to go to school and learn about good parental skills.
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, some
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still live with their elders who can guide them. To conclude, I believe that it is indeed crucial for every person to develop some skills to grow up their baby and
schools
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are the best options for that purpose.
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,
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should feel it convenient and comfortable to learn from the
schools
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