Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
In
this
modern era, most people are not being focused to do exercise amid
their working period even their free time. Change preposition
during
However
, this
trend can lead to get
more health issues. In Change the verb form
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this
essay, I will explicate the reason and sollution
with the Correct your spelling
solution
relevent
instances in the following paragraphs.
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relevant
To begin
with, nowadays people are being engaged with many thingsAdd the comma(s)
, therefore,
therefore
they can not do more drilling. Firstly
, the working folks are do
not have Change the verb form
do
a
free time to do Correct article usage
apply
the
fitness because they are run to earn more money for today expenses. Correct article usage
apply
Secondly
, this
kind of folks are engaged with more entertaniment
section because they can get a few time only for relax while they do not prefer any Correct your spelling
entertainment
health related
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health-related
as a
result
, most of the folks are affected many diseases. For example
, according to the survay
said thatCorrect your spelling
survey
,
more than 70% of the individuals are not done any kind of fitness to their day-to-day life Remove the comma
apply
as a
result
, the illness ratio are increased dramatically compared to ever.
Moreover
, certainly
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,certainly
this
situation have
to change in the future how the ministry should encourage Change the verb form
has
to
their citizens for doing gymnastics Change preposition
apply
this
means they should create the
awareness about the exercise to the individuals Correct article usage
apply
such
as increasing the gym. not only the city side but also
the country side
too in order to all kinds of human will get more benefit from Correct your spelling
countryside
this
. For example
, many western coutries
residents are held own gym Correct your spelling
countries
setup
in their own home in order Correct your spelling
set up
to
they can get more enough training from their modern home Correct your spelling
so
as a
result
, they can be fit.
To conclude, in this
busy world, the population are focused on technology, entertainment and money instead
of their health as a
result
, we can see that most adults are suffered to
many Replace the word
too
illness
. In ,addition, the population are ignored to their fashion related to Change to a plural noun
illnesses
the
gymnastics. Correct article usage
apply
Furthermore
, In my suggestion about this
problem the cabinet would increase the body building
competition as well as will give Correct your spelling
bodybuilding
huge
amount of winning status or winning person Add an article
a huge
as a
result
, more guy have
to do and will try to live fit.Change the verb form
has
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