Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

In

this

modern era, most people are not being focused to do exercise

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their working period even their free time.

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,

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trend can lead to

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more health issues. In

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sollution

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solution

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relevent

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instances in the following paragraphs.

To begin

with, nowadays people are being engaged with many things

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they can not do more drilling.

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, the working folks

are do

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not have

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free time to do

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fitness because they are run to earn more money for today expenses.

Secondly

,

this

kind of folks are engaged with more

entertaniment

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entertainment

section because they can get a few time only for relax while they do not prefer any

health related

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as a

result

, most of the folks are affected many diseases.

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survey

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more than 70% of the individuals are not done any kind of fitness to their day-to-day life

as a

result

, the illness ratio are increased dramatically compared to ever.

Moreover

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certainly

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this

situation

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to change in the future how the ministry should encourage

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their citizens for doing gymnastics

this

means they should create

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awareness about the exercise to the individuals

such

as increasing the gym. not only the city side but

also

the

country side

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too in order to all kinds of human will get more benefit from

this

.

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, many western

coutries

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countries

residents are held own gym

setup

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in their own home in order

to

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they can get more enough training from their modern home

as a

result

, they can be fit. To conclude, in

this

busy world, the population are focused on technology, entertainment and money

instead

of their health

as a

result

, we can see that most adults are suffered

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many

illness

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. In ,addition, the population are ignored to their fashion related to

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gymnastics.

Furthermore

, In my suggestion about

this

problem the cabinet would increase the

body building

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competition as well as will give

huge

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amount of winning status or winning person

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result

, more guy

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to do and will try to live fit.