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Discipling a child is the responsibility either father or teachers.Do you agree or disagree?

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Discipline is an important virtue that every
students
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 should possess.
Although
 there are some people who think that
this
 is the responsibility of
parents
, the opponents consider that teachers are trained and known to handle students effectively. I support the latter’s view since teachers are qualified for
this
. On one hand, every
teachers
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 are trained and developed to mould the pupils’ behaviour. It has been noted that various strategies are implemented to improve the misconducts and it is highly successful as well.
For example
, when a students act badly, can be disciplined in front of
class
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 to set an example would help him repent his bad behaviour and give an opportunity to understand and make necessary changes to become a better person.
By contrast
, when
parents
 impose some restrictions, can spring some relationship problems between the
parents
 and its offsprings.
Moreover
, the child tends to rebel and refuse to cooperate
that
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 can lead
a
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 lot of anxiety and depression, eventually, mental illness.
Similarly
, most of the
parents
 rarely attend training and workshops related to parenting so their methods may not be appropriate.
For instance
, corporal punishment or smacking can be used to deter the young one,
this
 would have a damaging effect.
Therefore
, correcting behaviour should be done by professionals rather than just either father or mother. In conclusion, even though there is an argument whether father or mother or educators are responsible
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 administering disciplinary actions. I personally think that since the educationalists are coached to administer
this
 professionally, they are the best for the same.
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