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Some education systems make students focus on certain subjects at the age of 15, while others require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of each system? Which is better?

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Education plays a significant role in every individual's life. Without ,
knowledge
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one
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 cannot gain success in
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's life. It is argued that students should only focus on the important
subjects
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 when they are at the age of 15.
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, many people think that learners should learn different types of
subjects
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 till they are in
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 writing, I will elaborate on the benefits and shall delve into my opinion before reaching a logical conclusion. To initiate with, there are a plethora of benefits of studying certain
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at the
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Firstly
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, a
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 will not indulge in the extra activities.
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, he will focus on only
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 subject in which he has to make his career and become successful.
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, the teenager is the age of learning where a disciple will decide what he has to opt
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,
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 may lead to the clear choice of his needs and desires.
On the other hand
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, if a
learner
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 will have the
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 of different
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then
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 only he can able to participate in the competitions
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 as quiz competition, debate and many more.
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 to
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, no
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 knows what will be happening in future and what will be the situations since
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 thinking will demotivate a
learner
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 but if he has the
knowledge
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 of a myriad of
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then
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 he can easily make the choice. According to my perception, studying a wide range of
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 at
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 is important.
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 may give the right direction to the students.
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, make
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 more confident and can gain different job opportunities in any field. In conclusion,
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 will know oneself better. If a
learner
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 has the right guidance
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 only he can able to achieve his goal. Studying certain
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 at
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 have their own importance but we cannot neglect the
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 which they will gain from studying a wide range of
subjects
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