Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits outweigh the problems?

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modern era, most people would like to go
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countries for their
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trend is increased dramatically in nowadays we can see that. I think that the advantages
outweight
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outweigh
the troubles and I explicate the following reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.
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with, there are many benefits for who the pupil
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to go to
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various parts of the world for their higher studies.
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, they can explore
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different kind of culture, values, and atmosphere.
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,
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the students are gotten the standard level education compare to their home country
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, they are able to get the broad knowledge as well as the experience and qualified lectures.
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,
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is the one kind of chance for
imigrate
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immigrate
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other words, many states are encouraged to the other state pupil what they will
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enroll to
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their territory
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as advertisement, old student feedback.
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, in Australia is given more overseas student visa to various territory and
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nation always welcome to other parts of the world student in order to the
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scholar
will receive
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of benefits
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as good education, employment and etc.
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, the
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scholar
decide to move to
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while they will meet
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problem
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problems
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.
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, the key issue is money
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means they will need a massive amount
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enroll
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to
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abroad university.
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, the graduate will get homesick because they will miss their family, friends and their home town.
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, a recent survey said that
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more than 60% of overseas graduates are suffered
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depression
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as
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, cultural shock
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as a result
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they can not concentrate
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their studies
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, they might be failed. To conclude,
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statement has more pros. Not only for graduate but
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the empire
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the abroad territory will develop for their overseas pupil admission capital in order to
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kind of the
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kingdom
can improve quickly compared to
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third
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level empire.
However
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, irrefutably in
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trend has more pros outweigh the troubles.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Global citizenship
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Cutting-edge facilities
  • Networking opportunities
  • Career advancement
  • Financial constraints
  • Acclimatization challenges
  • Support network
  • Educational disparity
  • Reverse culture shock
  • Bilingualism
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