Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits outweigh the problems?

In

this

modern era, most people would like to go

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countries for their

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.

This

trend is increased dramatically in nowadays we can see that. I think that the advantages

outweight

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outweigh

the troubles and I explicate the following reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are many benefits for who the pupil

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to go to

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various parts of the world for their higher studies.

Firstly

, they can explore

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different kind of culture, values, and atmosphere.

Secondly

,

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undoubtedly

the students are gotten the standard level education compare to their home country

as a result

, they are able to get the broad knowledge as well as the experience and qualified lectures.

Thirdly

,

this

is the one kind of chance for

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immigrate

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to the other nation

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other words, many states are encouraged to the other state pupil what they will

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enroll to

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their territory

such

as advertisement, old student feedback.

For example

, in Australia is given more overseas student visa to various territory and

this

nation always welcome to other parts of the world student in order to the

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scholar

will receive

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of benefits

such

as good education, employment and etc.

On the other hand

, the

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scholar

decide to move to

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while they will meet

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problem

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.

Firstly

, the key issue is money

this

means they will need a massive amount

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enroll

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to

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abroad university.

Secondly

, the graduate will get homesick because they will miss their family, friends and their home town.

For instance

, a recent survey said that

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more than 60% of overseas graduates are suffered

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depression

such

as

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, cultural shock

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as a result

they can not concentrate

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their studies

as a result

, they might be failed. To conclude,

this

statement has more pros. Not only for graduate but

also

the empire

such

the abroad territory will develop for their overseas pupil admission capital in order to

this

kind of the

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kingdom

can improve quickly compared to

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level empire.

However

, irrefutably in

this

trend has more pros outweigh the troubles.