Today, more and more students are deciding to move to a different country for higher studies. Do you think that the benefits outweigh the problems?
In
this
modern era, most people would like to go other
countries for their Change preposition
to other
post education-purpose
. Add a hyphen
post-education-purpose
This
trend is increased dramatically in nowadays we can see that. I think that the advantages outweight
the troubles and I explicate the following reasons in the upcoming paragraphs.
Correct your spelling
outweigh
To begin
with, there are many benefits for who the pupil are choose
to go to Change the verb form
chooses
a
various parts of the world for their higher studies. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
Firstly
, they can explore the
different kind of culture, values, and atmosphere. Change the article
a
Secondly
, undoubtdely
the students are gotten the standard level education compare to their home country Correct your spelling
undoubtedly
as a result
, they are able to get the broad knowledge as well as the experience and qualified lectures. Thirdly
, this
is the one kind of chance for imigrate
to the other nation Correct your spelling
immigrate
emigrate
in
other words, many states are encouraged to the other state pupil what they will Add the comma(s)
,in
enrollto
their territory Correct your spelling
enroll to
enrol
such
as advertisement, old student feedback. For example
, in Australia is given more overseas student visa to various territory and this
nation always welcome to other parts of the world student in order to the scholor
will receive Correct your spelling
scholar
lot
of benefits Change the article
a lot
such
as good education, employment and etc.
On the other hand
, the scholor
decide to move to Correct your spelling
scholar
other empire
while they will meet Change the wording
another empire
other empires
many
Correct your spelling
any
problem
. Change to a plural noun
problems
Firstly
, the key issue is money this
means they will need a massive amount for
Change preposition
to
enroll
to Change the verb form
enrolling
the
abroad university. Change preposition
in the
Secondly
, the graduate will get homesick because they will miss their family, friends and their home town. For instance
, a recent survey said that,
more than 60% of overseas graduates are suffered Remove the comma
apply
to
depression Change preposition
from
such
as homesick
, cultural shockReplace the word
homesickness
Add the comma(s)
, as a result,
as a result
they can not concentrate to
their studies Change preposition
on
as a result
, they might be failed.
To conclude, this
statement has more pros. Not only for graduate but also
the empire such
the abroad territory will develop for their overseas pupil admission capital in order to this
kind of the kindom
can improve quickly compared to Correct your spelling
kingdom
third
level empire. Add an article
the third
a third
However
, irrefutably in this
trend has more pros outweigh the troubles.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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