Some people think that paying taxes is enough to contribute to the society. Others argue that being a citizen involves more responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Every citizen has the responsibility to pay
taxes
for the wellness of their
country
.
People
argue that paying
taxes
is a sufficient contribution. While others believe that a person has much more duty despite only pay
taxes
. Many
people
think that only submit the tax to the
government
is enough for them. The predominant reason for
this
thinking is that most of the countries are collected a large amount of
taxes
from their residential.
People
work
day and night to get a standard life for themself and for their family. They give
taxes
from their salary to the
government
according to their law. In spite of
this
, they
also
pay
taxes
on grocery, clothes, and many more products. From these
taxes
, the
government
utilize
for
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the welfare of the society.
For example
, every
country
needs
a
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maintenance
such
as roads, building, employment and
also
does some community works for the who are unable to do
work
, for sick
people
. Others,
however
, including myself, believe that
people
responsibility is more than just only paying
taxes
. A person should do some community
work
for society.
This
will help other
people
and motivate others to do the same thing.
In addition
to
this
, it will create a good relationship with the community. To illustrate my point, in the city, many NGO's and charity workers
helps
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the
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needy
people
. A reliable person should join them and contribute to
this
charity
work
. To conclude, running the
country
is not an easy task. It needs a contribution of all the citizen in every field.
People
pay
taxes
to the
government
which they use for the citizen of their
country
.
However
,
people
should look after each other in spite of paying
taxes
only.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental
  • development
  • public services
  • social contract
  • financially support
  • civic responsibility
  • communal activities
  • engaged in the political process
  • advocating
  • enriches
  • actively participate
  • political process
  • less fortunate
  • environmentally responsible
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