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It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

#children #countryside #city
The best way for
children
 to grow in the rural areas than in the metro cities .youth can have a wired range of options to choose from in cities
such
 as educational institutes,part-time courses and some sports activities.In my opinion, I completely disagree with
this
.I shall examine my view on
this
 in the following paragraphs. On
one
side
,parents are very particular about their choice of schools with lots of expectation on carrier growth for their
children
's education.
Therefore
, more options in the market to choose a good
one
 but in the countryside, they have only two are less number of school available.Always is a better choose
city
.
For example
, In a rural ,area the school are with fewer teachers and very minimal educational factualities provided.Mainly, up to five are seventh classes only be taken.
However
,the case is quite opposite in
city
 schools. On the other
side
, communication of the youngest will improve in modern educational culture, they can increase their speaking skills it can add an advantage for them. The
city
side
 will teach many things from society and friends.For instances, a person who lived in the countryside has only had expertise in speaking in
one
 language.In another case, the
children
 whos bring up done on the
city
side
 can speak more than
one
 language. In conclusion, these days, parents are very particular about their schooling so they choose the
city
side
.
Therefore
, the bring up in cities are helps their
children
 to communicate very well in their life
also
 gain good knowledge.In my opinion, I disagree with
this
.
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