Some people think that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important Discuss both views.
Animal keeping, especially wild
animals
in zoos is a controversial topic, one
can support, one
not supports the maintenance of these special homes. But one
has to admit that zoological gardens
can provide lifelong experience. Visitors are able to peer into the wild world without any danger or harm and learn easily about distinct species
. Of course, in many cases for an animal being in zoo
– means being captivated unjustifiably. Add an article
the zoo
a zoo
As
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with everything
this
topic has also
its advantages and disadvantages.
Must be remembered that menageries have a very important educational role. Most of these complexes are built to form a huge garden with different buildings in it for each group of animals
, so one
is able to walk through and learn everything about species
, even the endangered ones to
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case
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its natural
animals
brings empathy to many people, raising awareness about their endangerment in the wild, which in most cases caused by human interactions.
Another key point is wildlife conservation. Wildlife conservation can be defined as the practice of protecting animal species
and their habitats. Generally, this
term is can be applied to species
that are in danger of becoming extinct by unnatural causes. These unnatural causes can be for
example, climate change, pollution, excessive hunting and Add the comma(s)
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animals
in captivity also
a huge problem. But zoological gardens
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increasing
the number of individuals.
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several reasons, captivation can have a positive effect – as it was discussed – but it certainly has a devastating effect too. No matter how nice the zoo is, Change preposition
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animals
, which can be especially troublesome for large animals
that are prone to roaming. It can be heard, that many wild predators become depressed due to the small and man-made environment. Taking animals
out of their habitat serves as an ethical issue because of its focus on human benefit as opposed to animal benefit, with of
course, the exceptions of captive breeding and freeing Add the comma(s)
,of
animals
from a dangerous situation.
Also
, equally important to mention, that sadly not all zoos are equal. There can be find
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find
gardens
where animals
are made to live in aggravating conditions. Fortunately, these kinds of gardens
are not so common, in most cases the management really pay enough attention to their inhabitant’s needs.
As can be seen, they have important
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an important
gardens
put animals
forward instead
of visitors wishes (and instead
of money). So in brief, until the natural environment does not improve and wild animals
are in danger in their habitat, zoos have undoubtedly important
role in order to preserve their life.Correct article usage
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