Some people think that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important Discuss both views.

Animal keeping, especially wild

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in zoos is a controversial topic,

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can support,

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not supports the maintenance of these special homes. But

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has to admit that zoological

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can provide lifelong experience. Visitors are able to peer into the wild world without any danger or harm and learn easily about distinct

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. Of course, in many cases for an animal being in

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the zoo

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– means being captivated unjustifiably.

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its advantages and disadvantages. Must be remembered that menageries have a very important educational role. Most of these complexes are built to form a huge garden with different buildings in it for each group of

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, so

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is able to walk through and learn everything about

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, even the endangered ones

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trait in

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of every animal garden is that they have information describing the animal, its history and

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location. Important to realize that learning about

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brings empathy to many people, raising awareness about their endangerment in the wild, which in most cases caused by human interactions. Another key point is wildlife conservation. Wildlife conservation can be defined as the practice of protecting animal

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and their habitats. Generally,

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term is can be applied to

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that are in danger of becoming extinct by unnatural causes. These unnatural causes can be

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example, climate change, pollution, excessive hunting and

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number of wild

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in captivity

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a huge problem. But zoological

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often take an active approach in helping animal populations. Many times, they breed captivate

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the number of individuals. These reasons are indisputable facts but must mention the negative side.

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several reasons, captivation can have a positive effect – as it was discussed – but it certainly has a devastating effect too. No matter how nice the zoo is,

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is limited for zoo

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, which can be especially troublesome for large

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that are prone to roaming. It can be heard, that many wild predators become depressed due to the small and man-made environment. Taking

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out of their habitat serves as an ethical issue because of its focus on human benefit as opposed to animal benefit, with

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course, the exceptions of captive breeding and freeing

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from a dangerous situation.

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, equally important to mention, that sadly not all zoos are equal. There can

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poorly led

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where

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are made to live in aggravating conditions. Fortunately, these kinds of

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are not so common, in most cases the management really pay enough attention to their inhabitant’s needs. As can be seen, they have

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role in education and animal protection. Nowadays more and more zoological

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put

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forward

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of visitors wishes (and

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of money). So in brief, until the natural environment does not improve and wild

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are in danger in their habitat, zoos have undoubtedly

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role in order to preserve their life.