Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem and how could the situation be improved?

In today's world, many

people

waste their

time

due to the and

traffic

times. In

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cause and

ways

that can help

people

to have a better journey. One and important issue about

that is

a significant increase in the

ways

traffic

. Many

people

tend to

use

their private

cars

, which play a crucial role in the amount of

traffic

. Most of them ,more specific in rush-hour,

use

their private

cars

for going to their job or shopping. As result, a huge amount of

cars

are driven in the

ways

and developed the

traffic

, which brings long

time

journey. Another reason is the poor

use

of public transports. Government improve railways and

busses

to decrease the amount of the

traffic

of the cities. They destroyed

cars

ways

for

this

phenomenon and build

busses

and trains

ways

. So if anyone doesn't

use

these facilities, there will be more

cars

and

busses

in

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highways. One of the practical

ways

for

that is

public transports improvement. Trains and

busses

can transfer many citizens

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less

time

. Even many of them are without delay and more comfortable. It is obvious, the government can invest

to

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these methods of transfer and benefit from both financial aspects and road

traffic

improvement. Another

way

is to encourage

people

to

use

bicycle and electric motorcycles. These circles

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advantages for both our city and our-selfs. If the government provides some special

ways

for them and give them some financial benefit

such

as free-tax many

people

tend to

use

them compared with their

cars

. Many environmental benefits come with that. Another beneficial

way

is online services. Nowadays, many services are done online and without any physical existence and it is a great

way

to saving our costs and

time

. Some Tv programmes and celebrities encouragements can lead

people

to buy online and reduce the

traffic

by

this

way

. In the conclusion,

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personally

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believe that

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people

must keep their

cars

for trips and travels and improve their city and themselves health by the alternative

ways

.