Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem and how could the situation be improved?
In today's world, many
people
waste their time
due to the and traffic
times. In this
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the essay
discuss
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about
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ways
that can help people
to have a better journey.
One and important issue about that is
a significant increase in the ways
traffic
. Many people
tend to use
their private cars
, which play a crucial role in the amount of traffic
. Most of them ,more specific in rush-hour, use
their private cars
for going to their job or shopping. As result, a huge amount of cars
are driven in the ways
and developed the traffic
, which brings long time
journey. Another reason is the poor use
of public transports. Government improve railways and busses
to decrease the amount of the traffic
of the cities. They destroyed cars
ways
for this
phenomenon and build busses
and trains ways
. So if anyone doesn't use
these facilities, there will be more cars
and busses
in
highways.
One of the practical Change preposition
on
ways
for that is
public transports improvement. Trains and busses
can transfer many citizens at
less Change preposition
in
time
. Even many of them are without delay and more comfortable. It is obvious, the government can invest to
these methods of transfer and benefit from both financial aspects and road Change preposition
in
traffic
improvement. Another way
is to encourage people
to use
bicycle and electric motorcycles. These circles has
advantages for both our city and our-selfs. If the government provides some special Change the verb form
have
ways
for them and give them some financial benefit such
as free-tax many people
tend to use
them compared with their cars
. Many environmental benefits come with that. Another beneficial way
is online services. Nowadays, many services are done online and without any physical existence and it is a great way
to saving our costs and time
. Some Tv programmes and celebrities encouragements can lead people
to buy online and reduce the traffic
by this
way
.
In the conclusion, ,
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,
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people
must keep their cars
for trips and travels and improve their city and themselves health by the alternative ways
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- Introduction
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- Conclusion
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