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Some people think that hosting international sports events is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

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 day and age, more and more contemporary attention has been placed on the opinion that it is beneficial for countries hosting
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events
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 while others disagree and suppose that the international
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competition
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 will have negative impacts on any
nation
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. In my opinion, I subscribe to the former idea. On the
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 hand, there are two major benefits that the
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, celebrating an international
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 event, might get. The
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 advantage is boosting the development of the domestic economy in a short period.
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 can be explained by the fact that a large array of visitors from different nations will partake in
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 event and as an inevitable consequence,
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 will help proliferate the sales of products and services in the host
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. The
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one
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 is that any
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 hosting
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events
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 will have great opportunities to attract more foreign tourists. To be more specific, the
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 hosting
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competition
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 as the World cup or the Olympic game will gain global exposure by virtue of introducing remarkable characteristics of that
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 to all visitors when the
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competition
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 is happening.
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, when Vietnam organized SEA Games 19 in 2003, a lot of foreign people knew and expressed special affection for
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country
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 because of its natural landscapes and delicious dishes and after that, more and more visitors have travelled to Vietnam as an inevitable consequence.
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, it is undeniable that many nations may encounter some drawbacks from celebrating
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competition
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. The
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 disadvantage is the financial burdens.
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 is because when organizing any international
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, particularly in
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 sector, any
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 has to allocate a huge amount of money to improve facilities
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 as indoor arenas and stadiums and in the circumstance that the host
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 cannot gain profits, it will have to shoulder a significant amount of financial loss. The
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 is that the crime rate may rise on
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 special occasion and
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 negative phenomenon can leave bad impressions on tourists’ eyes and undoubtedly,
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 is extremely terrible for any
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 having a desire to develop the tourism sector to boost its economy. In conclusion, with all the reasons mentioned above, hosting
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competition
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 has its own pros and cons,
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, nations celebrating those
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 will receive unaccountable benefits.
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