How to manage children and control children. WHat should the parent do

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A number of remedies can be done to tackle
this
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First
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and foremost, parent
need
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a balance way
works
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or family to be able to take better care of their children. It is acknowledged that work is vital;
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However
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however
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, they
also
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need to keep the
last
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goal in their mind which is a happy family with good children.
Reality
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,
well attended
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kids will find happiness in the protection and love from their family rather than being temped from outside.
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, will
preven
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prevent
teenagers from bad actions, or worse, illegal acts.
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, psychologist
hold
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the view that the best way to educate their children is to teach them
recognize
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the true values of life, rather than enjoy life.
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of
spend
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money
at
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their’s direction to enjoy social conveniences, it
is suggest
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that parents should teach them how to manage money and spend a reasonable way
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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