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Children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However, television cannot replace the book as a learning tool, which is why children are less well-educated today. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Given is a line graph depicting the data between
radio
 and
television
 British crowd in 1992. As can be seen,
television
 is more popular than
radio
 in the UK during 1992. Looking at
radio
 in detail, the proportion remained constant at 2.5% from 1 a.
m
. to 6 a.
m
. before reaching a peak of 25% at about 9 a.
m
. .
In addition
, the proportion of
radio
audiences
 followed a dramatical decline overall from 25% to 5%, starting at 9 a.
m
. until 23
p
.
m
. As for
television
, the percentage of
audiences
 fluctuated between 6% and 3% from 1a.
m
. to 8 a.
m
. ,followed by a brief dwindle to 4% at 11a.
m
. After reaching the lowest point of
television
audiences
 at 11a.
m
., the percentage of the crowd increased gradually to 15% at 13
p
.
m
.
Furthermore
, from 13p.
m
 to 15p.
m
., the portion of
audiences
 reached a plateau at 15%.
Then
 the per cent grew substantially to 40% at 19
p
.
m
. and reached a peak of 45% at 21p.
m
.
Finally
, the line of
television
 decreased sharply back to 15% while time was 23p.
m
.
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