With the development of technology, children are now living in a world that is different to what it was 50 years ago. What problems does this situation cause for society and family ?

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Technology
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is rapidly increasing day by day. These days children are using
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technology
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which is completely different compare to the past 5 decades. Because of
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there are many causes for community and family. Problems are mentioned below.
Technology
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is a gift from
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to human. If people use it in
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the right
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way so it becomes very beneficial for all
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humanity
.
Majority
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of citizens are using
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for
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to
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live
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a live
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easy life. Nowadays, there
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number
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a number
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of crimes and nuisance are happening with
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advancement and because of people are facing
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of problems.
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, these days
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children
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children
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are not spend
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time with their parents as well as parents are
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used to with entertainment in their leisure time. As well as Teenager and below 16 years boys and girls are becoming used to with their mobile phones.
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, nowadays
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children
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children
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are playing games on their computer,
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laptops
and in cellphones
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of physical games due to it. Health issues are rapidly increasing into them.
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, google surveyed that 75%
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and children who are below age 5 have
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aspects
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. Sometimes
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up to
five
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age
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child
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children
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are not able to manage their glasses but they have to do.
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, many
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child
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childs
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children
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are goes to
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the wrong
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way. They are learning bad skills like
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having
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, spreading wrong information about
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the nation
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or world and many more using
internet
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the internet
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.
This
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is a very dangerous problem
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apply
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worldwide.
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,
times
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the times
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of
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printed a line
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month about hacking in that news one
7 year old
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child hack his nation's education system to
imporove
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improve
his grade marks. In conclusion, parents should take awareness of their children about what they are doing when they are using any
technology
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. As well as, they should teach them how they can use
technology
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in
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beneficial
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a benificial
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way.
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