Some people believe that face to face communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.

Many believe that
one
to
one
talk can create more impression than writing a letter. I am
agreement
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in agreement

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with
this
statement.
This
essay will elaborate
my
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on my

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opinion in
this
regards.
To begin
with, facial expression and tone while expressing some point can create more impression on the listener.
One
can clearly understand
about
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apply

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the views of the speaker's, those are emphasised by him.
For instance
, a letter is a written document and it does not express the feelings of the writer, so the reader can easily get confused about the views of the writer.
On the other hand
,
now a days
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nowadays

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written communication is usually formal
that is
used by
the
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apply

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employers to convey the orders and instructions to the employees. Workers usually misunderstood the information in these official circulars.
Such
as
one
can easily
interprets
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interpret

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a document according to his need and
accordingly
responds to it. To conclude, I must say that written communication is not much effective than face to face talks.
Person
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A person
The person

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should prefer to clearly convey the message personally,
instead
of sending some written messages which could easily
misunderstood
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be misunderstood

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by the other person.
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