ou are studying English at a private language school attended by many international students. You are planning a surprise birthday party for a friend who has been feeling particularly sad and homesick. Write to another classmate and invite her/him to the party. In your letter: - Explain the reason for the party. - Give the date and time of the party. - Suggest that the classmate could bring to the party.

Hi Kevin, How are you? Hope everything is good
to
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you. Anyway, not sure that if you are aware of it,
then
our good classmate, David from Korea is going on his
birthday
17th
next
Saturday which on 29Th December. You know well that he feels lonely and doesn’t mingle with others,
therefore
I am
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plaining
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a surprise
birthday
party
to
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him. Generally, David has been
felling
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really low as he was unable to back home due to pandemic
In addition
, he is
also
trying to adapt to
new
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culture of
foreign
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country. Hopefully,
this
party will give him a big surprise on his
birthday
would certainly cheer him up. By the way,
this
warming party will be held in the school coffee shop at 18pm. Our
girls
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group made their own
birthday
cake, fried chickens and beef noodle.
Remaining
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group of
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a boy
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boy
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, each person can bring fruits, soft
drink
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, candles or flowers.
Last
but not least, you are one of his best
friend
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,
hence
, your attendance would definitely make him happier than ever. Thanks for your cooperation. Regards, Loan
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