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2019-12-07: Task 2 Some people think it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#people #time #career #friends
One of the most significant
issue
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of
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 the
world
 is
food
shortge
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shortage
shortages
. The main causes are population explosion and climate change. These issues are counteracted by factory farming and genetically modified foods. On one hand, since the development and advancement of modern technology and medicine, humans have been protected from many serious illness and diseases. Eventually, both life
expectency
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expectancy
 and birth rate have been skyrocketed and ultimately humans
pupulation
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population
 is growing
in
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 an alarming rate.
Nevertheless
, the area for
food
 production has been declined dramatically.
Similarly
, due to climate change, many
farmland
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farmlands
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 became arid land which lost its fertility, so the entire
food
 production had faced
severe
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a severe
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 shortage of edibles. Currently, the
world
 population rate is more than 750
millon
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million
.These two factors led
into
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 severe famine in various part of the
world
.
On the other hand
, the
world
 nations decided to bring a radical change in the way the eatables are produced.
First
 of all, they introduced factory farming, in which, animals are genetically modified to enhance theirs
efficieny
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efficiency
efficient
 in producing more eggs, milk, and meat.
Therefore
, the production has been increased within a small period of time.
Additionally
, there was a revolution in
agriculture
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the agriculture
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 sector by implementing a new cultivating method called engineered fruits and vegetables. These items are
resistent
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resistant
 to various diseases and climate changes along with tastier, bigger.
For instance
, in
USA
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the USA
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, they have been using
this
 method
since
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 many years successfully. In conclusion,
due to
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population explosion and
changed
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 climates contribute
food
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 scarcity.
This
 can be effectively managed by intensive farming methods and
use
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the use
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 of modified seeds.
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