It's generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for music and sport, and others are not. However, it's sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both ideas by giving your opinion.
In today's modern era,
people
do believes
that individuals are having Change the verb form
believe
a certain
Correct the article-noun agreement
a certain talent
certain talents
talents
such
as music and sports by birth. On the other side, some believes
that it is wrong myths. But it is a fact thatChange the verb form
believe
,
Remove the comma
apply
child
can be trained to become a good sportsman or a musician. In my opinion, both Add an article
the child
a child
the
sides are correct. In Correct article usage
apply
this
essay, I will discuss both views by giving an examples
.
Correct the article-noun agreement
examples
an example
First
and foremost, It is a true fact that some children
born with special talents
such
as dancing, singing, magician, artist and so on. In addition
, Because individuals with special talents
starts
showing their Change the verb form
start
specialty
just within a few months after born. Change the spelling
speciality
For example
, very popular and amazing Indian singer Ms.
Neha Kakkar has stolen many Change the punctuation
Ms
people
's hearts because of her great singing quality. However
, She is very famous all around the world. She started singing when she was only 1.5 years old by just watching her sister singing. So I completely agree that there are some children
's having special knowledge by birth.
On the other hand
, some people
who
oppose Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
view by stating that this
is wrong
myth. Add an article
a wrong
In addition
to this
, they do not Correct your spelling
believe
belive
in Correct your spelling
believe
this
fact because those people
who are trying to prove this
just a rumour they have never seen any talents
like this
in their life. It is a possitive
claim that students can obtain Correct your spelling
positive
a knowledge
about Remove the article
knowledge
a piece of knowledge
diffrent
field of their interest Because Nowadays, there are many coaching institutions are available where parents can Correct your spelling
different
enroll
their sons and daughters to prepare them to become a successful Change the spelling
enrol
sports person
or a musician. Correct your spelling
sportsperson
For example
, Celebrity cricketer Mr.
Virat Change the punctuation
Mr
kohli
got Change the capitalization
Kohli
a
coaching from Remove the article
apply
Change the capitalization
Mumbai
mumbai
institution to become a successful cricketer and a coach.
To summarize, Correct article usage
the mumbai
diffrent
individuals have Correct your spelling
different
a
several Correct article usage
apply
perspective
to analyze and understand the talent and Change to a plural noun
perspectives
a knowledge
in successful Remove the article
knowledge
a piece of knowledge
children
's. But as per my Correct your spelling
perspective
prespective
I do Add a comma
,prespective
belive
that many Correct your spelling
believe
children
's do born
with amazing talent.Change the verb form
bear
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