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Today, more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Why?

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In the present, the usage of technology is constantly on the rise.
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 it could make our life more comfortable and efficient, I personally believe that it has both positive and negative development in our life. In
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 essay, I will examine both sides before the conclusion is reached. The principal reason that supports the positive side is robots could work faster and have fewer mistakes than a human. Artificial intelligence, as known as AI, is a perfect example in
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 case. It is undeniable that AI has been replaced human labours in a myriad of occupations
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 as cleaners or waiters.
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, using a computer to achieve some works is providing efficient works.
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, to make a report, the program computer named Word could easily type perfect handwriting, and
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 check the spellings.
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, robots are considered to be a reason that makes people lose their job. As I mentioned above, AI could provide better work than human
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, the companies definitely require a robot
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 of an individual.
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, technology could not always respond to human feelings so, sometimes it could destroy humans’ mood if it has to do a job that connects to people directly.
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, call-centre, an occupation that a plethora of companies
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 AI as their employees. As we can see, people always complain about it whether it could not answer their questions or their response did not fit with the questions. In conclusion,
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 there is a myriad of a positive side to robots, it still has negative effects on human. I believe that we could balance
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 problem with technology in the future.
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