There is an increasing trend of old people living longer in many countries around the world. Do you think this has a positive or a negative effect on the population as a whole?

Museums and art galleries are

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great

place

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for wisdom and knowledge. There are many people who think that entry to these institutions ought to be free, whereas others argue that it is a must to have entry charges. I, personally, agree with the latter’s view because the amount would enable the curator to meet extra costs and the

visitors

respect the value of the centre.

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essay shall support my views in the coming paragraphs.

Firstly

, when museum

visitors

are charged, they tend to feel they should behave in a responsible manner, eventually, they would not cause any damage to the building and artefacts.

In contrast

, if it is

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free of cost, the onlookers take it as

granded

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granted

.

For example

, it has been identified that many

visitors

misuse the surroundings of the art galleries,

instead

of understanding the significance

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place.

Secondly

, from the collection of entry fees, the amount can be utilised for the infrastructure development,

otherwise

, they need to be funded by the government.

This

can facilitate some degree of autonomy and able to meet its own expenses. The country itself get some relief as the fund can be channelised for other pressing problems.

For instance

, in India, museum

visitors

need to pay for

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admission and the money has been utilising for the empowerment of the centre itself and offer better services for its

visitors

. In conclusion, I firmly consider that charging

admission

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fee for a museum is essential as

this

would allow

to have

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some kind of financial

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independence

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independency

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and people respect the value of the place.