In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is true that for several people, in many places around the world it is important to invest more
money
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on
building Change preposition
in
a new high-speed
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a new high-speed railway line
new high-speed railway lines
railway
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lines
between Use synonyms
cities
. Others including me, do believe that earnings of the country should be spent on improving existing public transport.
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To begin
with, it is widely believed that trains make travelling between Linking Words
cities
much more convenient. In fact, it is faster than moving by Use synonyms
plain
, Correct your spelling
plane
becasue
you do not have to wait in an airport for your flight. Correct your spelling
because
Moreover
, in order to visit other Linking Words
cities
, people should not pay a lot of Use synonyms
money
to buy Use synonyms
plain
tickets, as they have another better alternative like Correct your spelling
plane
railway
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lines
. Use synonyms
Also
, trains play a crucial role in the shipment of different products. Even so, the cost of Linking Words
the
constructing a long-distance train system is very expensive and Correct article usage
apply
this
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money
could be spent more efficiently.
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This
leads to the idea that Linking Words
these
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this money
money
should be spent on Use synonyms
improvement
of a current Correct article usage
the improvement
trasport
system. Correct your spelling
transport
Although
, public Linking Words
trasport
is seen as environmentally friendly, Correct your spelling
transport
for example
, the vast Linking Words
mojority
of the busses are long-standing and they can cause to pollute Correct your spelling
majority
atmosphere
. So, it could be solved by investing Add an article
the atmosphere
on
the new modern electric busses, which do not produce harmful emissions. Change preposition
in
In
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addition
current Add a comma
,addition
trasnport
is what many people use in their daily life, so it makes sense to improve it rather than spending Correct your spelling
transport
money
on new high-speed Use synonyms
railway
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lines
.
To sum up, Use synonyms
i
agree with the idea that Change the capitalization
I
railway
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lines
should be improved, in order to travel Use synonyms
other
Change preposition
to other
cities
. Use synonyms
However
, the government would be better to improve existing transport for humans’ Linking Words
conveniency
.Correct your spelling
convenience
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