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Nowadays governments are investing more in public transport such as buses and trains rather than in building new roads. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

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One of the features of a prosperous society is considered developed public
transport
 and today more investment is done to develop public transportation than building new
roads
. It is obvious, that government is trying to improve the quality of life at the same
time
 to tempt tourists. Of course,
this
 progress should be accepted as a positive aspect,
nevertheless
, it should be done simultaneously constructing new
roads
. Investing in public
transport
 the government directly improves the quality of life which attracts a lot of tourists. New public
transport
 system opens chances to be moved more comfortable and to be on
time
.
Moreover
, new types of buses or trains are more Innovative and cause less damage to the environment as well as cut fuel՛s amount. In China, has started a program of public transports’ modernization which will decry the amount of pollution at the same
time
 keep people’s health. To value negative or positive aspects of any development takes a lot of
time
,
nevertheless
, trying to improve something should be done comprehensively to escape from issues. So, to develop
transport
 system is essential for people and environment, but the investment should be done equal to construct new
roads
 which will complete the whole system giving more chances to find out new destinations for tourists and natives.
For example
, In Spain at
first
 build
roads
 which has tourist significance and develop all facilities surrounded it, that’s why it is one of the most preferable direction in Europe.
Accordingly
, investing in public
transport
 make people felling of comfortable and the country improve the level of development.
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