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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

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The number of
professionals
,
such
 as doctors and teachers, are increasing from year to year.
However
, they prefer to
work
 in developed
countries
 compare to their own poorer nations.
This
 phenomenon is mainly caused by two reasons, which are an
enermous
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enormous
 wages gap between poor and rich
country
, and the ego
by
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 the
professionals
 themselves.
Nevertheless
, there are a number of solutions to tackle
this situations
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.
Huge
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 difference in the financial compensation between
rich
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a rich
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country
 and poor
country
 may
makes
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 the
professionals
to
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leave. They can not even
fulfill
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 their basic needs if they
work
 in their own
country
. Take a look
in
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 Africa's minimum wages, if we compare it to America's, I believe
professionals
 in the United States make
huge
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 amount of money. The
second
 possible reason is
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because
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 their internal ego. When they
work
 in richer
countries
, they
also
 can guarantee their children's
education
 in the long run.
For instance
, if we compare the
education
 system between
third
-world
countries
 and
first
-world
countries
, I
also
 believe the
education
 in
first
-world
countries
 is far
more
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better
compare
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compared
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 to the other one. There are two effective solutions that possibly can solve those problems.
Firstly
, we need help from the rich and poor
countries
 to subsidize all the professional's minimum wages to can attract them, so they want back to their birth
countries
.
This
 initiative will
makes
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 the
professionals
 feel more appreciated.
Second
,
government
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the government
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 need to grow more nationalism in their own
countries
 by adding more
curicculum
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curriculum
 in their
education
 about nationalism.
Government
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 needs to convince the professional from young ages that if they
work
 in their own
country
, it means a lot for the
country
. The
professionals
 need to know that their own nations need them to grow. To conclude,
besides
 the problems that caused, the major solutions must come from the government themselves. I believe financial and
education
 support from them will attract the
professionals
 to back for their own
countries
.
Submitted by Albert Mercubuono on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Brain drain
  • Skilled professionals
  • Healthcare systems
  • Education systems
  • Economic growth
  • Dependency on foreign aid
  • Social inequality
  • Quality healthcare
  • Quality education
  • Retain talent
  • International cooperation
  • Sustainable growth
  • Scholarships
  • Professional development
  • Remote work capabilities
  • Local research funding
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