Many young people are leaving their home in rural area to study or work in cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

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willing to move away from remote

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on the rise. The advantages and disadvantages of

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, I will mention some of the probable reason. It is unlikely that a villager can find a suitable vacancy with a proper salary since there are not

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companies or organizations in the countryside.

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, they may be left with no choice but to move to the

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to fulfil their career ambitions and try to make it to the top.

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, the highest level of education available in rural

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high schools. Indeed, those willing to apply for undergraduate and postgraduate courses in universities should relocate to bigger

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. On the one hand, newcomers are more likely to be offered

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better positions in urban

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compared to the villages that they came from owing to the prospering and thriving economy of these

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, they will enjoy a high-quality life with higher standards.

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, new migrants can follow a wide variety of extra-curricular activities and plenty of entertainment options and facilities on their campus and dorms. They can take up a new hobby,

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as playing tennis in the courts of the university or becoming a member of a music association so that they can improve other aspects of their life.

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, there are slight drawbacks arising from the

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relocating to the

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, the mid-age residents living in remote

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get older with the passage of time and there are few young children or grandchildren in their families to look after seniors if the process of the

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leaving these

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continues.

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, villages are probably deprived of many developments they could experience since the majority of the workforce and people who were considered to be

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active part of the community have left these

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, new ideas for connecting their location to the internet could be brought by younger and up-to-date people living in these

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. In conclusion, the

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are willing to leave rural

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to fulfil their career ambitions and achieve their academic goals which cannot be done in their current living area. The opportunities they will find in

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as better jobs positions and extra-curricular activities definitely outweigh the negative impacts of migration on the village they came from: seniors having nobody to look after them and villages deprived of potential developments.