Some feel that school uniforms make schools safer for students, create a "level playing field" that reduces socioeconomic disparities and encourage children to focus on their studies rather than their clothes. Others say school uniforms infringe upon students' right to express their individuality, have no positive effect on behavior and academic achievement. Discuss both sides & give your opinion.

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No one can deny that some people believe that

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uniforms are a must to protect them from socioeconomic disparities and encourage them to focus only on their studies, while others prefer to think that Junior should allow wearing

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I will discuss the possible reasons that support each view, along with what benefits they bring to society followed by my personal opinion on the same. On the one hand, the option to think that schools must have a mandatory dress code to follow has its own benefits for many convincing reasons. Most importantly, it makes

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safer and encourage juniors to concentrate on academic activities rather than focusing on

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it does not allow anyone to discriminate on the basis of

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, despite the above argument, other people choose to believe that schools without uniform have much more advantages over schools with compulsory uniforms for many obvious reasons.

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with funky shoes and a cap on the head. In conclusion, it seems to me that uniform should be compulsory for student as it helps to maintain the sense of community in the

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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