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Nowadays, more and more people engage in dangerous activities, such as sky diving and motorcycling. Are you in favour of them? Use examples to support your opinion.

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It is undeniable that these days most of the community are like adventure and do an action
such
 as skydiving, motorcycling and many more. In my opinion,I am not in favour of taking the risk in life and do
such
activities
 for the sake of entertainment.
This
 essay will discuss it in forthcoming paragraphs. To commence with, doing risky
activities
 are not suitable for
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people
 who have a phobia of height, and water. It proves dangerous for an individual. It seems as many have lost their lives for
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entertainment purposes.
For instance
, In India, a group of
friends
 went
for
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the
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sky diving in which one of their
friends
 died due to a
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. He had no experience of height. So, it is really harmful when one has not set the mind for these
activities
. These
activities
 should handle under the expert.
Moreover
, life-threatening games are played by an individual to impress their
friends
. They believe that it makes a higher status among
friends
.
for instance
,
Last
 year, I went to Himachal Pradesh with my family there cops caught a boy who was motorcycling roughly. After asking him, he replied, his
friends
 challenged him to do
this
 activity. So, I do not support these kinds of
activities
 whose consequences are bad.
Furthermore
,
people
also
 do water rafting which is really dangerous when sudden a tide came and take the
people
 away. To illustrate, in the newspaper I read
last
 week a group of a friend taken away by the sudden tide. These
activities
 can take our lives. To conclude, I do strongly not agree with these dangerous
activities
 in which for the sake of entertainment the cost is our life.
People
 who are expert can take risks in their lives.
Submitted by Rajwinder Kaur on

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