In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Native
food
culture has been substitute by instant fast-
foodfood
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food food
good food
chains globally
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while having adverse effects for both families and
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society
. I strongly agree
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fact the
this
have impacted the health of both young and old in
society
which can lead to detrimental consequences.
To begin
with,
fast
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food
chains have been listed as one of the major contributors to non-communicable diseases over the years.
For Example
, researchers have proven that the majority of the
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food
chains use palm oil for
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production process which generates transfat which is unhealthy for the human body.
Furthermore
,
this
has been one of the major reasons for
cholostrol
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cholesterol
, Diabetics which causes 75 per cent of the global deaths during the
last
five years.
Finally
, to preserve time and
efficiancy
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efficiency
in the current competitive
world
parents are making the wrong choice of selection when it comes to
food
habits. Obesity and undernourishment have been a dilemma in the current
society
due to bad
food
habits.
Firstly
, while people have refrained from consuming homemade nutritious
food
for reasons
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availability ability
of organic foods, the solution
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always been the worse selected.
Secondly
, parents have got used to buying foods from places
such
as KFC, Pizza Hut which saves time and money but destroying the health of both the children and the elderly.
For instance
, the
World
Health Organization shows that 1 in 5 children in Europe and America are either suffering from obesity or having a lower immune system due to these habits. In conclusion, even though the current context of the complex
world
has given no choice for the parents and the
society
to invest time in making their own
food
at home, it is evident that the entire
world
is heading for a catastrophic disaster with the option of having instant
food
as there meal preference.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural identity
  • heritage
  • obesity
  • diabetes
  • globalization
  • nutrient-rich
  • bonding
  • local cuisine
  • fast food chains
  • convenience
  • processed ingredients
  • sustainability
  • culinary traditions
  • mass-produced
  • environmental degradation
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