In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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have impacted the health of both young and old in society
which can lead to detrimental consequences.
To begin
with, fast
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fast-food
food
chains have been listed as one of the major contributors to non-communicable diseases over the years. For Example
, researchers have proven that the majority of the fast
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food
chains use palm oil for there
production process which generates transfat which is unhealthy for the human body. Correct your spelling
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Furthermore
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has been one of the major reasons for cholostrol
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last
five years. Finally
, to preserve time and efficiancy
in the current competitive Correct your spelling
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world
parents are making the wrong choice of selection when it comes to food
habits.
Obesity and undernourishment have been a dilemma in the current society
due to bad food
habits. Firstly
, while people have refrained from consuming homemade nutritious food
for reasons non-
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Secondly
, parents have got used to buying foods from places such
as KFC, Pizza Hut which saves time and money but destroying the health of both the children and the elderly. For instance
, the World
Health Organization shows that 1 in 5 children in Europe and America are either suffering from obesity or having a lower immune system due to these habits.
In conclusion, even though the current context of the complex world
has given no choice for the parents and the society
to invest time in making their own food
at home, it is evident that the entire world
is heading for a catastrophic disaster with the option of having instant food
as there meal preference.Submitted by madonnasama on
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