In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by international fast foods. This is having a negative effect on both families and societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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culture has been substitute by instant fast-

foodfood

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food food

good food

chains globally

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while having adverse effects for both families and

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society

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. I strongly agree

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fact the

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have impacted the health of both young and old in

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which can lead to detrimental consequences.

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with,

fast

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fast-food

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food

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chains have been listed as one of the major contributors to non-communicable diseases over the years.

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, researchers have proven that the majority of the

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food

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chains use palm oil for

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production process which generates transfat which is unhealthy for the human body.

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,

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has been one of the major reasons for

cholostrol

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cholesterol

, Diabetics which causes 75 per cent of the global deaths during the

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five years.

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, to preserve time and

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efficiency

in the current competitive

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parents are making the wrong choice of selection when it comes to

food

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habits. Obesity and undernourishment have been a dilemma in the current

society

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due to bad

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habits.

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, while people have refrained from consuming homemade nutritious

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for reasons

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availabilitylability

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availability ability

of organic foods, the solution

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always been the worse selected.

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, parents have got used to buying foods from places

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as KFC, Pizza Hut which saves time and money but destroying the health of both the children and the elderly.

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, the

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Health Organization shows that 1 in 5 children in Europe and America are either suffering from obesity or having a lower immune system due to these habits. In conclusion, even though the current context of the complex

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has given no choice for the parents and the

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to invest time in making their own

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at home, it is evident that the entire

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is heading for a catastrophic disaster with the option of having instant

food

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as there meal preference.