The internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Over different times, the way
people
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communicate took several forms, namely meeting,
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, mailing, posting, and calling. Currently, most of these communications are replaced with
virtual
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online platform
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as
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. Some views say that
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is a good advancement while others think that it has
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adversely
affected our
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. In my opinion,
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social media has some drawback, particularly in disengaging
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from their local environment, It has a
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positive influence on our
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and the way we communicate with each other. on the one hand, the presence of different online
platforms
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such
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as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and many others, which are full of entertainment, games, and activities, have caused
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individuals
to spend most of their time on their phones or laptops.
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has caused them to become distant from their families and local communities.
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, they grow up as physically present but emotionally distant from their
famillies
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families
and local environment. Teenagers,
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, prefer to play
onlines
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online
games with their virtual friends rather than go for a picnic with their family or visiting and checking on their neighbours and relatives.
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, these online
platforms
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has
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brough
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brought
the world closer. Some believe that the internet gave us the opportunity to get to know foreigners from other countries and normalize each other as human beings without looking into colour, borders, or tongues.
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has
broke
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a barrier that once was that between us as different nations and will surely make the world
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and more
peacefull
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peaceful
place to live in.
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, making friends and sharing
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of humour between two fighting nations over
an online
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online platforms
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platforms
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can
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relax
the flamed situation a bit.
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,
people
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can express their opinion freely using sharing and hashtag properties to calm down some fired situations.
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, The major great influence of
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social media can be of immense importance for
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world peace. In conclusion, Social media has indeed affected the way we communicate and
although
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some
people
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think
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has been a downside for communication, others think the opposite. I
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belive
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believe
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that, owing to the huge positive impact online
platforms
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can have on our
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, they are of a great positive influence. why would not they?
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • instant communication
  • global connectivity
  • networking opportunities
  • data privacy
  • data breaches
  • mental health issues
  • excessive use
  • depression
  • anxiety
  • feelings of loneliness
  • misinformation
  • fake news
  • public misinformation
  • societal harm
  • shared interests
  • engaged
  • foster communities
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