The internet has changed the way we communicate. Much communication today happens through social media. Some people support this and think it is a positive development. Others believe that social media have negative effects. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Over different times, the way
people
communicate took several forms, namely meeting, traveling
, mailing, posting, and calling. Currently, most of these communications are replaced with Change the spelling
travelling
virtual
online platform Add an article
a virtual
the virtual
such
as facebook
. Some views say that Change the capitalization
Facebook
this
is a good advancement while others think that it has adversly
affected our Correct your spelling
adversely
Correct your spelling
lives
life
lifes
. In my opinion, Correct your spelling
lives
although
social media has some drawback, particularly in disengaging people
from their local environment, It has a tremendous
positive influence on our Change the adjective
tremendously
Correct your spelling
lives
life
life's
lifes
and the way we communicate with each other.
on the one hand, the presence of different online Correct your spelling
lives
platforms
such
as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram, and many others, which are full of entertainment, games, and activities, have caused individulas
to spend most of their time on their phones or laptops. Correct your spelling
individuals
This
has caused them to become distant from their families and local communities. As a result
, they grow up as physically present but emotionally distant from their famillies
and local environment. Teenagers, Correct your spelling
families
for example
, prefer to play onlines
games with their virtual friends rather than go for a picnic with their family or visiting and checking on their neighbours and relatives.
Correct your spelling
online
On the other hand
, these online platforms
has
Change the verb form
have
brough
the world closer. Some believe that the internet gave us the opportunity to get to know foreigners from other countries and normalize each other as human beings without looking into colour, borders, or tongues. Correct your spelling
brought
This
has broke
a barrier that once was that between us as different nations and will surely make the world Change the verb form
broken
better
and more Correct article usage
a better
peacefull
place to live in. Correct your spelling
peaceful
For instance
, making friends and sharing sense
of humour between two fighting nations over Add an article
a sense
the sense
an online
Correct the article-noun agreement
online platforms
an online platform
platforms
can relaxe
the flamed situation a bit. Correct your spelling
relax
Also
, people
can express their opinion freely using sharing and hashtag properties to calm down some fired situations. Hence
, The major great influence of the
social media can be of immense importance for Correct article usage
apply
the
world peace.
In conclusion, Social media has indeed affected the way we communicate and Correct article usage
apply
although
some people
think this
has been a downside for communication, others think the opposite. I Correct your spelling
believe
belive
that, owing to the huge positive impact online Correct your spelling
believe
platforms
can have on our Correct your spelling
lives
life's
life
lifes
, they are of a great positive influence. why would not they?Correct your spelling
lives
Submitted by elhowati on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!