Employers should give their staff at least four-weeks’ holiday a year to help employees get better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an argument that employers should grant their employees around a month of paid leave to ensure that they will have better performance.
This
essay strongly disagrees with this
opinion because giving them a long time
off will slow down their productivity
upon their return and companies need to hire more resources to fill in.
Firstly
, although
providing time
off to employees is a good thing, taking too long time
for vacation will lower their productivity
. This
is because the majority of people will have to readapt their working habits, thus
they tend to be slower in the early days upon their return to the office. Many tasks will require a longer time
thus
the productivity
will be lower. This
phenomenon will negatively impact the company. For example
, recent studies in Jakarta have shown that after two weeks of break, the majority of staff will need around two days to be back at the same working pace before they leave.
Secondly
, corporations must have more human resources to replace the staff who take time
off. This
is because employers cannot let the position be vacant to ensure the stability of their operational activities. Thus
they should hire more people and this
will cause higher expenses in salaries. However
, adding more workers, in this
case, does not increase the revenue, therefore
this
measure is not profitable for employers. For instance
, most enterprises in Jakarta only offer 12 days annual leave to their employees and national public holidays to keep the productivity
and the profitability of the company.
In conclusion, this
essay believes that granting nearly a month of holiday to staff is not urgent because after the long break workers tend to have lower productivity
and companies should allocate more budget to pay more resources.Submitted by intanannisa.ia on
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