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In future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want onlinr wiyhout paying

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The popularity of traditional newspapers and magazines has been reducing since the advent of
the
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digital
media
. There are some people who think that in future readers tend to completely depend on electronic
media
 as it will get at free of cost. In my opinion,
this
 may not be going to happen because the modern
media
 definitely charged subscription fees.
Firstly
, online subscribers would be asked to pay
monthly
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 payment for both e-books and magazines. It has been already started by many providers.
In other words
,
media
 giants used to give some free service as part of their promotion to attract more users.
For example
, the Hindu, a well-known national daily, now, it stopped the free-version of their e-newspaper.
Therefore
, it is clear that online
newpapers
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newspapers
 are chargeable and no longer free.
Secondly
, since many
government
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have begun to levy a huge amount of tax from the
media
 to publish their content online platform, eventually, the users would be charged to meet the financial burden.
However
, compared to
the
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paper based
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 newspapers, the online version can be affordable since it requires
minimum
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 cost of printing and distributions.
Similarly
, Nowadays, many people have
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smartphones
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smart phones
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smartphones
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, which assist them to get
live-updates
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, along with audio and visuals. So it is evident that
popularity
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 of these
media
 would increase in the coming years. In conclusion, even though more readers will prefer digital
media
 for news, it may not be because of free of cost.
This
 is probably due to its convenience and
real time
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