Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, there are some

people

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usually change their food mentality in order to follow a vegetarian or vegan

diets

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.

Obvoiusly

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, it means that they abolished

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and

fish

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from their life. In fact, they think that

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is not only better for their health but

also

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it could create benefits to our world environment. In

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essay

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view and

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I

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state my own opinion regarding the matter. First of all, it is important to underline that from a "medical" point of view, proteins

derive

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from

meat

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or

fish

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represent an important part of our

week

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diet. In fact, it is usually recommended to eat both two or three days a week.

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, there are

people

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prefer that type of

proteins

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from their daily meal or dinner because it is usually suggested by

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that

meat

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and

fish

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could cause cancer in the future. Because of

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,

people

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prefer to eat proteins from

other

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such

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as legumes.

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,

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from their own point of view, believe that

animals

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should not be touched and hunted because in

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way we could damage our environment. In fact,

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example

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fishes, are

responsable

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responsible

to clean

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for cleaning

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and

substain

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sustain

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eco-system

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ecosystem

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.

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reason, if

people

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start to avoid

fish

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and

meat

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to

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their typical foods, our society could obtain

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greatest nature and

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restore the relationship with our Earth.

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, it is important to underline that it is true that

animals

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are fundamental for our habitat, but I personally agree that

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represent the "

food-chain

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" and

for

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this

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reason

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it is recognized that

animals

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eat

animals

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and we are similar to them.